Our video offers the experience of an undocumented refugee that overcomes so much adversity by most of the people around him, to disprove the general stereotype that people would categorize him in. The goal that Victor wants to reach is one in which people don't have a negative perception about refugees. We believe that this video will help people better understand what being a refugee means and the under appreciated value that all refugees can give to a community.
We understood that we had to convey a persons story in a small amount of time, as a class collectively we discussed what we wanted our purpose to be and we went over possible questions that can be asked in the interview and what message are you trying to send your audience how are you trying to get them to feel.
Having a lot of feedback gave us many valuable suggestions that we applied many of because when you have many different opinions about the quality of your writing piece it can give you new ideas. Also constant edits allows reviewers to cut unnecessary information that is irrelevant to the authors purpose
Discourse Community
This video clearly defines what a Discourse Community is and how it works and the language that is used in different discourse communities